Re: "A Poem"
Re: "A Poem" -- Brewski	Post Reply		Forum

Posted by: Remi 05/21/2006, 03:56:21  (About author) Edit

I liked your poem. From my particular outpost upon this mortal plain it did uplift my spirit. But it does have quite a few technical flaws and would be much improved if they could be removed. I suggest you call up your old English teacher.

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